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26 February 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's Delila again:

A bulky man let me in. With a jerk of his head he walked down a short hallway to a set of spiral stairs and waved a hand downward.

"You first, muffin," I said. As I suspected, he descended slowly and carefully to avoid the traps that had been set so blatantly in my honor. When a guillotine swung down, he ducked. I leaped neatly onto the chain and smiled at him as it moved back and forth. "I'll take it from here. Thanks!"

She's spunky.

31 comments:

  1. Nice snippet! I think I like this girl!!

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  2. I really, really like her! Well done.

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  3. Love the muffin comment. Love her!

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  4. Definitely makes one wonder what's coming up!

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  5. "Muffin"

    I love it! Go, Delila.

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  6. She is indeed, spunky, I really like her. Nice six!

    ~Sarah

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  7. A girl with an attitude and brains- love her to death- like a female MacGyver

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  8. you had me at muffin. Great show, and fantastic visual of the gullotine.

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  9. Love a feisty, intelligent heroine! Fun snippet.

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  10. Love how she makes him go first, knowing what to expect.

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  11. That was very fun, Lindsay. Happy anniversary.

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  12. Wow. Sounds like fun, fun, fun! lol!

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  13. LOL

    Loved the muffin comment for a bulky dude. Show great character there, as does the rest of it.

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  14. I don't think spunky quite covers it. LOL

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  15. Kick arse !! I like her !! she has spunk !! loved the sixer !!
    Lol muffin !! she doestn seem so sweet to me lol.

    thanks kat
    kittee_cat@bigpond.com

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  16. I'm wondering where they are heading and why. Such a fun 6!

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  17. Spunky! I love her attitude! Great six!

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  18. Wow! Lots of action in that snippet.

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  19. lmao at the you first mufffin....love it

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  20. Hmmm sassy! I love it!!

    xx
    Angela
    http://angelasstone.livejournal.com

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  21. Love the attitude--not a heroine to underestimate!

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  22. She sounds like a great character. Would love to know more. I'll have to check the book out.

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  23. I love how she calls him muffin, yet suspects foul play -- she sounds feisty. love to read more!

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  24. She is fun! Can't wait to read more.

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  25. "muffin". I like that!

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