Here's Delila again:
A bulky man let me in. With a jerk of his head he walked down a short hallway to a set of spiral stairs and waved a hand downward.
"You first, muffin," I said. As I suspected, he descended slowly and carefully to avoid the traps that had been set so blatantly in my honor. When a guillotine swung down, he ducked. I leaped neatly onto the chain and smiled at him as it moved back and forth. "I'll take it from here. Thanks!"
She's spunky.
Nice snippet! I think I like this girl!!
ReplyDeleteI really, really like her! Well done.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great heroine! :-)
ReplyDeleteLove the muffin comment. Love her!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely makes one wonder what's coming up!
ReplyDelete"Muffin"
ReplyDeleteI love it! Go, Delila.
She is indeed, spunky, I really like her. Nice six!
ReplyDelete~Sarah
I love her!
ReplyDeleteA girl with an attitude and brains- love her to death- like a female MacGyver
ReplyDeleteyou had me at muffin. Great show, and fantastic visual of the gullotine.
ReplyDeleteLove a feisty, intelligent heroine! Fun snippet.
ReplyDeleteLove how she makes him go first, knowing what to expect.
ReplyDeleteMuffin! LMAO!
ReplyDeleteThat was very fun, Lindsay. Happy anniversary.
ReplyDeleteWow. Sounds like fun, fun, fun! lol!
ReplyDeleteSpunky is right!
ReplyDeleteLOL
ReplyDeleteLoved the muffin comment for a bulky dude. Show great character there, as does the rest of it.
I don't think spunky quite covers it. LOL
ReplyDeleteKick arse !! I like her !! she has spunk !! loved the sixer !!
ReplyDeleteLol muffin !! she doestn seem so sweet to me lol.
thanks kat
kittee_cat@bigpond.com
I like this. She's feisty :)
ReplyDeleteI'm wondering where they are heading and why. Such a fun 6!
ReplyDeleteMuffin. one of my favs!
ReplyDeleteSpunky! I love her attitude! Great six!
ReplyDeleteWow! Lots of action in that snippet.
ReplyDeletelmao at the you first mufffin....love it
ReplyDeleteHmmm sassy! I love it!!
ReplyDeletexx
Angela
http://angelasstone.livejournal.com
Love the attitude--not a heroine to underestimate!
ReplyDeleteShe sounds like a great character. Would love to know more. I'll have to check the book out.
ReplyDeleteI love how she calls him muffin, yet suspects foul play -- she sounds feisty. love to read more!
ReplyDeleteShe is fun! Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDelete"muffin". I like that!
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