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01 March 2011

Six Sentence Sunday!

Continuing on with Delila:

I swung from chain to chain, avoiding the ground and the various tools of disembowelment that greeted me until I landed in a half crouch on the floor at the base of the stairs. Mr. Bulky stared at me with his mouth open, so I winked at him and went the only way I could.


Lucky for me I had excellent night vision because it became ominously dark. Several doorways loomed between me and a flickering light at the end of the hallway, and I hesitated at them. Faint whispers of aura emanated from them, so I scaled the walls instead and went over them. Whatever lurked in those rooms was not human, not animal, but caught somewhere in between.

I am so glad to see positive feedback on her; occasionally I wonder if she's too strong. LOL

20 comments:

  1. Love a strong, feisty heroine! Great descriptions.

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  2. I like it. I'd want to read more.

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  3. She's great! Love the six you posted.

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  4. Strong heroines are awesome. Great six!

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  5. Kick ass! (And "Mr. Bulky"! That just tickles me.)

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  6. Very interesting! I'd like to read more.

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  7. I do like a strong heroine. Nice snippet :)

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  8. Can't be too strong. I loved it!

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  9. I love strong women protags. Great six!

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  10. A crazy magical obstacle course! I like those. Good six.

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  11. I love her throwing a look at "Mr. Bulky"--classic. I like her strong!

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  12. Nice post! :) I love the tension and her kick-ass'ness. :)

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  13. No such thing as too strong. I'm sure she has a soft side :)

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  14. The whole six make you wonder what kind of place she is and that, if the occupants of the rooms aren't human or animal and she's sensing their auras, exactly what is she?

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  15. Love the wink at Mr. Bulky. Makes me want to figure out who he is. Nice six!

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  16. I love a strong woman. Plus, she's only too strong if you give her weak adversaries. And then it's the adversaries problems, not hers.

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  17. Ain't nothing wrong with a chick that kicks ass. I think she's just fine!

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  18. I LOVED THIS!! Definitely something I'd like to read...adding Lindsay to be tbr list!

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