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01 March 2011

Six Sentence Sunday!

Continuing on with Delila:

I swung from chain to chain, avoiding the ground and the various tools of disembowelment that greeted me until I landed in a half crouch on the floor at the base of the stairs. Mr. Bulky stared at me with his mouth open, so I winked at him and went the only way I could.


Lucky for me I had excellent night vision because it became ominously dark. Several doorways loomed between me and a flickering light at the end of the hallway, and I hesitated at them. Faint whispers of aura emanated from them, so I scaled the walls instead and went over them. Whatever lurked in those rooms was not human, not animal, but caught somewhere in between.

I am so glad to see positive feedback on her; occasionally I wonder if she's too strong. LOL

20 comments:

  1. Cate Masters06 March, 2011 09:05

    Love a strong, feisty heroine! Great descriptions.

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  2. Lindsay06 March, 2011 10:42

    Love a strong heroine.

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  3. Edie Ramer06 March, 2011 11:01

    I like it. I'd want to read more.

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  4. Chrystalla Thoma06 March, 2011 11:03

    She's great! Love the six you posted.

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  5. Lisa Fox06 March, 2011 11:28

    Strong heroines are awesome. Great six!

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  6. Taryn Kincaid06 March, 2011 11:43

    Kick ass! (And "Mr. Bulky"! That just tickles me.)

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  7. Vanessa06 March, 2011 12:02

    Nice! Very intriguing!

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  8. Jessica E. Subject06 March, 2011 12:38

    Very interesting! I'd like to read more.

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  9. Mina Carter06 March, 2011 12:52

    I do like a strong heroine. Nice snippet :)

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  10. Rebecca Royce06 March, 2011 12:58

    Can't be too strong. I loved it!

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  11. Lauri J Owen06 March, 2011 13:59

    I love strong women protags. Great six!

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  12. Anonymous06 March, 2011 14:18

    A crazy magical obstacle course! I like those. Good six.

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  13. Laura Kaye06 March, 2011 19:44

    I love her throwing a look at "Mr. Bulky"--classic. I like her strong!

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  14. Miranda Buchanan06 March, 2011 20:34

    Nice post! :) I love the tension and her kick-ass'ness. :)

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  15. Alanna Coca06 March, 2011 21:17

    No such thing as too strong. I'm sure she has a soft side :)

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  16. Pip Green07 March, 2011 00:44

    The whole six make you wonder what kind of place she is and that, if the occupants of the rooms aren't human or animal and she's sensing their auras, exactly what is she?

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  17. Marie Dees07 March, 2011 09:51

    Love the wink at Mr. Bulky. Makes me want to figure out who he is. Nice six!

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  18. Casi07 March, 2011 18:44

    I love a strong woman. Plus, she's only too strong if you give her weak adversaries. And then it's the adversaries problems, not hers.

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  19. Catriana S.13 March, 2011 06:22

    Ain't nothing wrong with a chick that kicks ass. I think she's just fine!

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  20. Stacey Kennedy14 March, 2011 07:45

    I LOVED THIS!! Definitely something I'd like to read...adding Lindsay to be tbr list!

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