Well, since Delila finished up her scene (for the most part, lol) I think I'll switch to a WIP this week. Meet Sam, a waitress at a biker bar, and Shadow, a charismatic beast of a man.
Sundays were usually slow, and that night was no different. Tables were empty, save for the few rogue tourists, and I was leaned against the bar, bored, when he walked in.
I didn’t notice him at first; he was alone and the atmosphere didn’t change, but I smelled his cologne when he sat next to me at the bar. “Hello, Sam,” Shadow said.
“Hello, there. What’s your poison?” I switched into server mode almost immediately and got his beer since Stetson was out back doing something with something or other and Elena had disappeared. “What brings you by alone? I thought you ran with a pack like the other wolves nearby.”
A barmaid, a wolfish guy, beer, what more can a reader want? Lovely.
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing.
ReplyDelete~ Renee
Intriguing six! Sounds like a great read.
ReplyDeleteYou have a very unique voice, love it
ReplyDeleteA wolf?! Fascinating six, and I love that she noticed his cologne first...
ReplyDeleteI do love a good wolf. A very interesting set up.
ReplyDeleteInteresting six and I wonder why she thinks he should be running with a pack.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Oh, I liked this and want to know more
ReplyDeleteAn intriguing excerpt!
ReplyDeleteNice six. Hmm, sexy men who run in packs.
ReplyDeleteI really love your voice!
ReplyDeleteHmmm. Wonder where this is going? Great six.
ReplyDeleteInteresting setup for things to come
ReplyDeleteGreat six. Now I want more! I love wolves!!!
ReplyDeleteThis Six definitely wants me want to read more. Great job!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing! More please! :)
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