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03 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's some more from Sam and Shadow:

“Ouch,” he replied, smiling. “Sometimes, a wolf can run alone, you know.”

“Only rogue ones.” I settled my elbows on the bar and watched him take a swig from his longneck while he studied my cleavage with tattooed water lilies trailing into the line. “Find the hidden treasure, sunshine?”

“God, you’re feisty.” Something sparked in his eyes.

Sam has been fun to write.

11 comments:

  1. Fun to read, too. I'm unclear on the tatoo... is it OF waterlilies?

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  2. Yes, I'm not following the image of the tattoo either. But, I do visualize well that something sparkling in his eyes. I want to know more about Sam and Shadow!

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  3. Nice six. I get the tattoo is waterlilies but the part about trailing into the line has me wondering - does she have that line tattooed on her or does she say the line?

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  4. Nothin at all wrong with feisty! lol

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  5. This is a FUN excerpt! :) Love her attitude.

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  6. I think the line on the tattoo is the cleavage line, hence the hidden treasure. Naughty and fun.

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  7. Hmmm. Kind of hard to like a man who stares at her chest that overtly, then calls her "feisty" for calling him on it. I enjoyed your six.

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