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17 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Continuing on with Sam's story:

"You're right, of course." He took another long drink and I watched his Adam's apple flex taking the liquid down. "I came back to see you."

A drop of sweat beaded on the bottle and ran down the side to meet Shadow's hand. "I'm not sure where the confusion is, but I don't run with biker gangs."

In the fluorescent light of the bar his eyes were an unnatural shade of orange instead of the warm brown they should have been. "I'm not with the gang right now, am I?

22 comments:

  1. Cate Masters17 April, 2011 07:51

    Oops! Love that last twist. :) Great snippet.

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  2. Jenna Jaxon17 April, 2011 08:10

    I think I like where this is going. Sam and Shadow are going to make sparks fly soon, I think! Great six.

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  3. Anonymous17 April, 2011 08:18

    I'm wondering what other colors his eyes can be. Very nice snippet.

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  4. sue17 April, 2011 08:37

    yes - orange eyes - the mind imagines

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  5. Marie Dees17 April, 2011 08:42

    Ohh, good interplay between the two of them. yep, he's not with the gang right at this moment.

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  6. Jayel Kaye17 April, 2011 09:04

    YIkes. this sounds really , really good!

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  7. Roberta Walker17 April, 2011 09:49

    Love how you've shown us how distracted Sam is by Shadow, the tension build and twist makes me want to know more. Thanks for sharing!

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  8. Unknown17 April, 2011 10:19

    Oooh, very tense and sexy. Love this bit.

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  9. Rebecca Royce17 April, 2011 10:30

    I loved the adam's apple description. Well done.

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  10. Jessica Knauss17 April, 2011 11:08

    Shadow is very distracting. Might as well put our full attention on him!

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  11. Anonymous17 April, 2011 11:48

    This is a great set up! Orange eyes, wow, that just blew me away.

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  12. Lindsay17 April, 2011 11:48

    Love the snippets. Bet the bottle wasn't the only place where there was a bead or two of sweat dripping down.

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  13. Vegetarian Cannibal17 April, 2011 11:59

    How can a bottle sweat? Is HIS sweat dripping down the bottle or is it condensation dripping down?

    Nice six!

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  14. Liana Brooks17 April, 2011 15:36

    Oh, dear. He sounds so serious. Goox six.

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  15. Lisa Fox17 April, 2011 15:45

    Oooo, something's up! What a great snippet!

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  16. Anonymous17 April, 2011 18:12

    Gotta love it when thing turn "unnatural."

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  17. Stacey Kennedy17 April, 2011 18:32

    Oh he's just full of sexy attitude! Love it!

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  18. Verna Clay17 April, 2011 18:40

    Great tension and anticipation of what will happen next!

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  19. Jessica E. Subject17 April, 2011 19:21

    I love his response! Nice six!

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  20. Alanna Coca17 April, 2011 19:40

    Something about biker gangs scare the poo out of me. Already on the edge of my seat lol

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  21. Jean Davis18 April, 2011 07:35

    Orange eyes? Yay for something different! Great tension between them.

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  22. Unknown18 April, 2011 14:38

    Ohhhh! I like him. It's the flippant wit.

    ~ Renee

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