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24 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Sam goes on:

"You're always with the gang no matter how far apart you are." I met his gaze; he was handsome, sure, and practically oozed sexuality and charisma, but I'd be damned if he'd be luring me anywhere.

"How come you never say my name?"

"I don't know your name."

"You've heard it." A devilish smile played at his lips.

29 comments:

  1. Great dialogue. Great chemistry!

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  2. Can't wait to see more of this. Seems very mysterious.

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  3. So intriguing! I agree, great hook.

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  4. well obviously a devilish grin is a Depp grin :D

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  5. Yep, some chemistry bubbling up here!

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  6. There is so much sexual tension there. I can't wait to read more. Nice work!

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  7. Ooo, devilish smile.

    Funny how something so little says a lot.

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  8. She can resist as much as she wants, but I bet she gives in eventually. ;)

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  9. Great six sentences to pull me in and the "devilish grin" snapped the cuffs on. I'm caught. Reel me in with more. :)

    Happy Easter, Lindsay!

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  10. Oh, I like the chemistry between them.

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  11. Ooh, very intriguing! Great six!

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  12. He sounds like a stinkpot . . . the best kind of character.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  13. Oh, a dangerous but charismatic man. Don't we all love 'em?

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  14. Intriguing! I want to read what happens next. I love the chemistry between these two.

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  15. I'm wondering why she won't say his name. They do have great chemistry.

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  16. Sounds like a power struggle of the most intriguing kind--great chemistry, a fun six!

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  17. Great line to end with! I want more!

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  18. Love the dialogue. He appears to be a rogue--love that, too!

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  19. Lovely flirtation happening here. Nice six!

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  20. I enjoyed the dialogue so much that I went back to your last posting to see the lead-in. Now I want more!

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  21. She's smart not to say his name...Lots of power in a name--especially when combined with oozing sex appeal! Great Six!

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