"You're always with the gang no matter how far apart you are." I met his gaze; he was handsome, sure, and practically oozed sexuality and charisma, but I'd be damned if he'd be luring me anywhere.
"How come you never say my name?"
"I don't know your name."
"You've heard it." A devilish smile played at his lips.
Great dialogue. Great chemistry!
ReplyDeleteDevilish grin. I'm hooked!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see more of this. Seems very mysterious.
ReplyDeleteSo intriguing! I agree, great hook.
ReplyDeletewell obviously a devilish grin is a Depp grin :D
ReplyDeleteGreat six.
ReplyDeleteYep, some chemistry bubbling up here!
ReplyDeleteThere is so much sexual tension there. I can't wait to read more. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing. Great six!
ReplyDeleteOoo, devilish smile.
ReplyDeleteFunny how something so little says a lot.
She can resist as much as she wants, but I bet she gives in eventually. ;)
ReplyDeleteGotta love a devilish grin!
ReplyDeleteGreat six sentences to pull me in and the "devilish grin" snapped the cuffs on. I'm caught. Reel me in with more. :)
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter, Lindsay!
Oh, I like the chemistry between them.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
ReplyDeleteGood dialogue.
ReplyDeleteOoh, very intriguing! Great six!
ReplyDeleteHe sounds like a stinkpot . . . the best kind of character.
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Oh, a dangerous but charismatic man. Don't we all love 'em?
ReplyDeleteIntriguing! I want to read what happens next. I love the chemistry between these two.
ReplyDeletecan't wait to hear more.
ReplyDeleteI'm wondering why she won't say his name. They do have great chemistry.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a power struggle of the most intriguing kind--great chemistry, a fun six!
ReplyDeleteGreat line to end with! I want more!
ReplyDeleteLove the dialogue. He appears to be a rogue--love that, too!
ReplyDeleteLovely flirtation happening here. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the dialogue so much that I went back to your last posting to see the lead-in. Now I want more!
ReplyDeleteShe's smart not to say his name...Lots of power in a name--especially when combined with oozing sex appeal! Great Six!
ReplyDeleteHehe, like it! :)
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