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22 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

And Beth again:

“Yeah, babe, just a wrong number.”

He groaned. “Did someone get your number mixed up with Emily’s again?”

This isn't Emily, I wrote. “I guess so.”

“When are you going to take her off your phone plan?” Dalton looked up at me with his lovely green eyes, shadowed by sleep.

Poor Beth. I feel bad for her where her story is going. lol

19 comments:

  1. Arlene22 May, 2011 07:53

    I'm not sure what's happening here, but I'd read on just to hear more from the green eyed guy with sleep shadows. And to see how badly you plan to tormet Beth.

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  2. Cate Masters22 May, 2011 09:17

    Oh the things our characters have to endure, lol. Looking forward to reading more.

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  3. Cherie Marks22 May, 2011 09:22

    Hmmm. A little sexty-texty? Case of the wrong number? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Great six.

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  4. Gem Sivad22 May, 2011 09:28

    I'm intrigued. Have to come back and find out more. :)

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  5. Marie Dees22 May, 2011 10:05

    Hmm, just what's going on with that phone?

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  6. Lindsay22 May, 2011 11:38

    This story still has me intrugued as to what she's going to do.

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  7. Jayel Kaye22 May, 2011 11:41

    I can't figure out where this is going but I want to find out.

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  8. Jessica Knauss22 May, 2011 12:01

    The worse you feel about what you're putting your characters through, the better the story from the reader's POV. This is intriguing.

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  9. Hailey Edwards22 May, 2011 13:08

    Undercurrents run deep here. Very somber six.

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  10. Jessica E. Subject22 May, 2011 13:52

    She has so many secrets she's hiding. I wonder if the stress of keeping them all will make her slip. Nice six!

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  11. Kim Knox22 May, 2011 14:56

    Intriguing six :)

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  12. Susanna Fraser22 May, 2011 15:14

    Nice. I like the interplay between what's said and unsaid.

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  13. Monica Enderle Pierce22 May, 2011 16:37

    I wonder who she's trying to protect, herself, him, or Emily. (Ah, character torture. Is there anything better? Or worse?)

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  14. Camryn Rhys22 May, 2011 20:38

    Thanks for stopping by my blog. I enjoyed your six. :)

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  15. Jean Davis22 May, 2011 21:33

    I'm a little confused as to what is going on, but Dalton's eyes sound enticing.

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  16. Verna Clay22 May, 2011 22:04

    I'm hooked on his green eyes!

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  17. Sandy Nachlinger22 May, 2011 23:28

    Very intriguing. It's so unnerving to be awakened with a phone call or text message! I don't know what's happening here, but it can't be good.
    BTW, thanks for commenting on my blog.

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  18. Lynne Murray23 May, 2011 01:21

    Can't see what the truth is yet, but some lies are clearly being told. Intriguing six!

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  19. Pippa Jay23 May, 2011 05:08

    This is all just so ominous. :(

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