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29 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Continuing on in the text message saga:

“When she gets sober.”

“You know that’s not happening anytime soon.”

He reached for me as I shoved out of the covers and stood. “I know that, Dalton, but she’s my twin.” I padded out of the bedroom, pulling the door closed behind me.

Once safely in the kitchen, I opened the message: 'If this isn’t Emily, then who is it?'


25 comments:

  1. JoAnne Kenrick29 May, 2011 07:07

    oh, I'm totally intrigued to read more, to learn more...what's going to happen? Fab six!

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  2. Anonymous29 May, 2011 08:21

    Great dialogue and insight

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  3. Lisa Fox29 May, 2011 09:05

    Ooo, creepy! Who could it be???

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  4. Sarah Grimm29 May, 2011 09:31

    What happens next? No really, you can tell me. ;) Great six!

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  5. Zee Monodee29 May, 2011 10:02

    You keep ramping up the suspense! Great job

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  6. Gem Sivad29 May, 2011 10:18

    I want to know what's going on. Bet the husband does too. Great suspenseful six!

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  7. Jessica Knauss29 May, 2011 10:23

    Quite a bit of intrigue here!

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  8. Anonymous29 May, 2011 10:30

    OMG who is it? Really? More!

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  9. Rebecca Royce29 May, 2011 10:32

    Oh I totally want to read more.

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  10. Susanna Fraser29 May, 2011 11:38

    Great six--I continue to love how you put the suspense into an ordinary-seeming situation.

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  11. Anonymous29 May, 2011 12:34

    Wow. This texter is persistent. Intriguing six.

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  12. Arlene29 May, 2011 12:38

    You've got great suspence going on here, love it.

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  13. Jessica E. Subject29 May, 2011 12:39

    Well, that solved one of the mysteries, but there is so much more. A great six!

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  14. Elisa Dane29 May, 2011 13:30

    Totally want to know who's texting her!

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  15. Lindsay29 May, 2011 15:20

    That six is totally intriguing

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  16. Monica Enderle Pierce29 May, 2011 17:30

    I agree with everyone else, vey suspenseful. Making me nervous for her!

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  17. Marie Dees29 May, 2011 18:23

    I want to keep on reading!

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  18. Kayla Tocco29 May, 2011 19:22

    You've hooked me! I want I know who it is too.

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  19. Sandy Nachlinger29 May, 2011 19:43

    This whole text message idea is great. I'm enjoying your weekly six sentences. Keep 'em coming.

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  20. TNW29 May, 2011 22:05

    I definitely want to read more...love the name Dalton and have always been interested in twins...my mother is a faternal twin and my father has identical twin sisters and I wanted to have them, but didn't. I have even started a couple of stories involving twins, just haven't finished them yet. I won't to know more about your story.

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  21. Meg29 May, 2011 23:54

    Ooooh - nice hook to keep us reading! Great six!!

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  22. Unknown30 May, 2011 02:28

    I'm with Lisa...Creepy! But not only who...but what does he/she want???

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  23. Hailey Edwards30 May, 2011 10:15

    Uh oh. Now that is the million dollar question.

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  24. Pippa Jay31 May, 2011 04:40

    Eek, I wouldn't answer. But then, the caller would just be convinced it IS Emily. What's she going to do?!

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  25. Jayel Kaye31 May, 2011 06:37

    I love stories about twins. MUst be the added dimension and specilness of twins

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