Picking up from where we left off before I forgot to sign up for this lovely little list. LOL
Rain poured down
the window to her left. “Hey,” he said with an enthusiastic smile.
“Hey,” she replied,
trailing off when she couldn’t bring his name to mind. “How’ve you been?”
Nervous, Adelaide adjusted her glasses and tucked her hair behind her ears. It
wasn’t everyday a Congressman’s assistant spoke to a lowly paralegal at Capitol
Hill.
That's it for this week! Have a great one, everybody.
Great six, Lindsay! I felt her nervousness, and could tell she was somewhat of a nerd all in those few sentences!
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ReplyDeleteNice set up illustrating with her thoughts and actions how she perceives their business levels.
ReplyDeleteI can feel the tension already. Great six.
ReplyDeleteVery cute! I could feel her nervousness and surprise. Hope he's nice.
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ReplyDeleteHer nervousness comes across loud and clear. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet! Love the way you describe her character. Great six, Lindsay!
ReplyDeleteLove the little details that bring her to life here.
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