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16 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

I'm going to switch it on back to Billie for a few weeks, seeing as she releases soon. Here we go:


In the last room in the house sat a wolf. He glanced at me with beautiful blue eyes and then looked away as though ashamed of himself. I stepped into the room and angled my head to look at him. "Hello, wolf," I said, expecting a response. He stood, shaking his fur out to alleviate the dust and approached me slowly, circling and sniffing my hair. Standing still, I wasn't fearful of him at all.

Have a happy week, and don't forget to save those ta-ta's! :)

10 comments:

  1. Very nice. I even saw the fur rippling.

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  2. Oh - love the rippling fur. Nice wolf and nice six!

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  3. Why isn't she afraid of the wolf? Nice six!

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  4. Good use of description. Thanks for sharing!

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  5. Tense. I like it!

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  6. Nice visual. Intriguing six. Is the narrator a woman or a female dog? I couldn't tell but kind of felt like it was a dog sizing up the wolf. ?

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  7. I'd be scared! Curious as to why she'd not.

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  8. Great fairy tale type voice here!

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