04 December 2010

Sunday again...

I'm going to blog six sentence Sunday early this week. Here we go:

I half smiled and struggled to control my breathing. "Well, the cat brought a bird to the back porch so I put it back in the tree. It might have come from that."

Aidan cocked an eyebrow. "I see," he said very softly. His leg was pressing against mine and the leaf was sitting at the nape of my neck. I focused on his cheek piercing, glinting brightly in the sunlight.

:) Poor Charlie. She can't catch a break in these Sunday bits.

13 comments:

Jayel Kaye said...

Cheek piercing? Makes me wonder what else is. I liked it very much

MarieDees said...

I like the direction this is going in

Taryn Kincaid said...

Nicely descriptive.

Jessica Subject said...

Hmmm, I wonder what Aiden is going to do about that leaf.

Dee Carney said...

Am I the only one who is fascinated/horrified by cheek piercings? LOL. Great job!

Christa Paige said...

I've never read a hero with a cheek piercing, totally unique!

Alanna Coca said...

Great six!

Eleri Stone said...

Very vivid description. Nice tension.

Sandra Sookoo said...

Would love to read more!

Lindsay K. said...

Thanks! I'll be continuing on from that point next Sunday. I love piercings and tattoos, personally, so it was incorporated into this story. :)

laynap said...

An intriguing post. Can't wait to read more of it.

Joleene Naylor said...

Heh-heh. I scrolled down and read last week's too ;) Nice ocntinuation!

Hailey Edwards said...

I got hung up around the piercing too. Yum.