04 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Picking up from where we last left Mel:

"Everybody calls me Mel," I said.

Levi cocked an eyebrow. "Are you even a little scared, Mel?" My name rolled off his tongue like liquid velvet.

"Oh, I'm terrified," I replied with a nervous laugh. "I've probably peed myself, but I'm too scared to care."

There you have it. Hope everybody's enjoying their weekend!

10 comments:

Gem Sivad said...

Great dialog. Loved the "probably peed myself..."

Cate Masters said...

lol, poor Mel! Love the humor in the face of the threat.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Liquid velvet. Mmm.

sarahballance said...

Love the humor here!

lexcade said...

Oh Looooord, poor Mel. She's so screwed LOL. Great six, Lindsay!

Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) said...

Great six! Definitely in character. Nice!

Tara Manderino said...

Oh, I definitely want to know what has Mel frightened.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

LOL "Peed herself" I would be scared too!

Kathleen Grieve said...

That is one frightened chick! Great dialogue to show her fear!

Zee Monodee said...

Lol. She sure tells it like it is, eh? :)