Happy Thursday! Please enjoy today's guest, Gregory Delaurentis!
BLURB:
A
high profile murder of a Wall Street executive in Westchester pits three people
against the criminal underbelly of Manhattan nightlife. The key players are two
ex-cops turned private investigators—Kevin Whitehouse, whose sharpest tool is
his keen analytical mind, and David Allerton, a former Special Forces
operative—and Margaret Alexander, Kevin’s lover. In their search for a killer,
they are forced to travel to the edge of sanity and morality, while stumbling
onto their own confusing secrets as well. The Cover of Darkness is a
gritty noir saga that untangles a web of deceit in the course of tracking down
a brutal murderer.
The
pool area was wide and reflected the sun on this hot summer day. It was edged
with white marble so polished that it looked like pearl. Deck chairs lined the
sides of the long pool, which was two lengths more than Olympic-sized. Outside
the deck area was the carpeted lawn of the vast backyard, dappled with sun.
Hugh
Osterman walked along the side of the pool wearing a heavy terry cloth robe and
sandals. In his right hand, he held a martini glass. He ran his left hand
through his sandy sun-streaked hair as he looked over his shoulder at the man
following him.
“What’s
going on? I don’t get it,” Osterman said, stopping at the end of the pool where
the flotation chairs were kept.
“They
said no,” the man replied. Considering the backdrop, he was incongruously
dressed in a dark suit and tie.
“They
said no . . . just like that?”
Osterman
sat his drink down on the marble surface, and pushed a flotation chair into the
deep end of the pool, sending it out and away. Then he peeled off the robe and
dove smoothly into the water, emerging next to the floating chair.
“You
go back and tell them that we aren’t pleased,” Osterman said sternly, pulling
himself up and into the seat of the chair. “You tell them that Hugh Osterman
wants to know what’s holding things up—what the problem is.”
The
suit just stood at the edge of the pool, opening his jacket against the heat of
the day. Osterman paddled to the side, and reached out and retrieved his
martini glass. “I take it you have nothing to say about this?” he persisted,
despite the other man’s silence.
The
suit shook his head.
“Well,
what are you waiting for?” Osterman said as he tipped the glass up to his lips.
Suddenly, the bottom of the stem shattered. Osterman gurgled as he dropped the
glass, blood bubbling from his mouth, an open tear in his neck. He jolted
upright in the chair as the suit closed the distance between them, his Colt .38
Super still trained on its victim, its silencer smoldering.
Osterman
slowly sat back as the suit pumped more rounds into Osterman’s bare, well-defined
chest—the hot shells of his pistol ejecting out and striking the surface of the
water, settling to the bottom. His life ended as his body tumbled from the
floating chair, his blood a widening crimson slick roughly in the area where
his body slipped through.
The
suit popped his clip, slipped in a new one, and headed for the sprawling house.
GUEST BLOG:
RESEARCHING TIPS
I don’t have many tips
for researchers. I don’t know how well a researcher I am myself. One thing that
I do know when I’m researching is that I look for primers first. I usually get
these from the Internet just to get an overall view of what I’m researching. A
lot of time I’m researching the law, and those topics can become downright
arcane. The need for an overview is as important as in-depth research itself.
It gives you a sense of confidence as you move forward into the deeper things
of the subject you are researching. Otherwise, to me, you are jumping off at
the deep end of the pool.
Another tip is to not
get too involved into what you are researching unless your novel calls for it.
Case in point: the gist of my story was a murder, but two crooked cops were
being investigated at the same time. What was needed by me was to research a
department of the NYPD that does the investigating of officers that have been
accused of wrongdoing. So I began researching this department, jumping in and
delving deep. After a few days I was hip deep in study, juggling all types of
data and frankly I was drowning in information. But what was more important was
that the research was taking over the focus of the story which was a murder. At
this point I hit the brake, simplified my explanation of the department and
went back into my story, diminishing the investigation of the two officers and
bringing to the fore the investigation of the murder. The moral of this story:
keep your priorities. When it comes to research, don’t lose track of what your
novel is about and research accordingly.
Finally, is your
research all that important? It’s nice to be able to point out erudite facts on
a subject, and it makes you look like you know what you are talking about, but
are these facts germane to the story or does it inflate your ego? I know this
is a strong statement because if you write about something it’s important to be
an expert about it, but not all the time, and not concerning everything. The
best thing to be an expert about is your story and your characters. Don’t get
lost in scholarly explanations of subjects or terms or
places when you should be concentrating on developing your story and keeping
your readers from being bored with external things.
Like I said, I don’t
consider myself the premiere researcher, but I do my studying accordingly and
in conjunction with my story so that one does not outshine the other.
AUTHOR INFORMATION:
Gregory
Delaurentis spent his adult life roaming from job to job, working for Lockheed
in California, various law firms in New York, and financial firms on Wall
Street. Throughout this period of time, he was writing—unceasingly—finally
producing a large body of work, albeit unrecognized and unpublished . . . until
now. Cover of Darkness is the first in a series of upcoming books that
include Edge of Darkness, Pale of Darkness and Cries of Darkness.
These novels follow the lives of three individuals who do battle bringing
criminals to justice, while they struggle to understand the complex
relationships that exist among themselves. This intriguing trio has absorbed
the attention of Mr. Delaurentis for the past year and a half, so much so he
decided to self-publish their stories to bring them to a wider audience. [AUTHOR’S DISCLAIMER: These are works of
fiction. Name, characters, places, and incidents either are the product of the
author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual
persons, living or dead, events, or locales is entirely coincidental.]
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11 comments:
I would like to take this opportunity to thank the host of Lindsay's Scribblings for featuring my book today, and I would also like to thank those who participate by commenting. Thank you again Rita, and best of luck to all in the raffle. Have a great day.
Wow, what an excerpt this was. Very frightening.
Thank you very much MomJane and thank you for dropping by and commenting.
Wow! Cover of Darkness sounds like a great thriller! Thanks for sharing the excerpt and your researching tips was an interesting read. I'm not a writer, but I can understand how getting all that information can be overwhelming. Great Post!
Thank you so much Dee, and thank you for dropping by and sharing that. Have a great day.
Great excerpt and I loved the bit about the research. :)
Congrats on the book!
Dana
dana19018 at gmail dot com
I could very easily get lost doing research. I follow links and get distracted.
marypres(AT)gmail(DOT)com
Thank you Ms. Wright and Ms. Preston, and thank you for coming by and posting about my book. Have a great day!
Thanks for sharing the great excerpt and the giveaway. Sounds like a great book. evamillien at gmail dot com
Thank you Ms. Millien and thanks for stopping by.
Thanks for the giveaway. I would love an Amazon GC.
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