Happy Sunday, everybody! This is my first official six sentence Sunday posting, so yay for that! Hope you enjoy; this is a writing in progress and untitled as of yet. (Charlie is the female protagonist, by the way) Here we go:
"You look exhausted," Aidan commented.
"Gee, thanks," I replied with a chuckle. "I've been working some long hours is all."
His eyes narrowed. "I see. Been climbing trees recently, Charlie?"
My heart stopped beating altogether and I could have collapsed in my driveway in a twitching pile of death, but instead I raised my eyebrows and smiled. "No. Why do you ask?"
And there you have it. See you next Sunday.
12 comments:
Welcome!
Twitching pile of death! << good line!
Kerrianne
He knows something! Can't wait to see more.
Hmmm,sounds like someone's been naughty. Great snippet!
Another Aidan!
Welcome to Six Sunday!
I agree that twitching pile of death is a very amusing line!
Welcome to Six Sunday! Great snippet.
OH I want to read more about this.
Uhoh what's Charlie been up to? Love twitching pile of death : )
Happy first post! Oh boy, there is something more going on here than simple tree climbing, what is it? Hoping you will share soon.
Hmm... Curious to know why he would ask if she's been climbing trees. Can't wait to ready more.
Well, why?!
(Welcome to #sixsunday!)
Haha, thanks for all the feedback! This teaser bit is killing me; I typically don't like to leave people hanging.
And with that, I'll leave you hanging. ;)
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