21 November 2010

Six Sentence Sunday!

Happy Sunday, everybody! This is my first official six sentence Sunday posting, so yay for that! Hope you enjoy; this is a writing in progress and untitled as of yet. (Charlie is the female protagonist, by the way) Here we go:

"You look exhausted," Aidan commented.

"Gee, thanks," I replied with a chuckle. "I've been working some long hours is all."

His eyes narrowed. "I see. Been climbing trees recently, Charlie?"

My heart stopped beating altogether and I could have collapsed in my driveway in a twitching pile of death, but instead I raised my eyebrows and smiled. "No. Why do you ask?"

And there you have it. See you next Sunday.

13 comments:

The Book Blogger said...

Welcome!
Twitching pile of death! << good line!
Kerrianne

Emily Cale said...

He knows something! Can't wait to see more.

Lindsay K. said...

Thanks!

Lisa Fox said...

Hmmm,sounds like someone's been naughty. Great snippet!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Another Aidan!

Welcome to Six Sunday!

Lex Valentine said...

I agree that twitching pile of death is a very amusing line!

Marsha A. Moore said...

Welcome to Six Sunday! Great snippet.

Jayel Kaye said...

OH I want to read more about this.

Eleri Stone said...

Uhoh what's Charlie been up to? Love twitching pile of death : )

Christa Paige said...

Happy first post! Oh boy, there is something more going on here than simple tree climbing, what is it? Hoping you will share soon.

Jessica Subject said...

Hmm... Curious to know why he would ask if she's been climbing trees. Can't wait to ready more.

Dee Carney said...

Well, why?!
(Welcome to #sixsunday!)

Lindsay K. said...

Haha, thanks for all the feedback! This teaser bit is killing me; I typically don't like to leave people hanging.

And with that, I'll leave you hanging. ;)