27 March 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Well, since Delila finished up her scene (for the most part, lol) I think I'll switch to a WIP this week. Meet Sam, a waitress at a biker bar, and Shadow, a charismatic beast of a man.

Sundays were usually slow, and that night was no different. Tables were empty, save for the few rogue tourists, and I was leaned against the bar, bored, when he walked in.


I didn’t notice him at first; he was alone and the atmosphere didn’t change, but I smelled his cologne when he sat next to me at the bar. “Hello, Sam,” Shadow said.


“Hello, there. What’s your poison?” I switched into server mode almost immediately and got his beer since Stetson was out back doing something with something or other and Elena had disappeared. “What brings you by alone? I thought you ran with a pack like the other wolves nearby.”

17 comments:

Arlene said...

A barmaid, a wolfish guy, beer, what more can a reader want? Lovely.

Cara Bristol said...

Makes me want to read more.

Zenobia Renquist said...

Very intriguing.

~ Renee

Sarah Grimm said...

Intriguing six! Sounds like a great read.

Claire Robyns said...

You have a very unique voice, love it

Chrystalla Thoma said...

A wolf?! Fascinating six, and I love that she noticed his cologne first...

Lisa Fox said...

I do love a good wolf. A very interesting set up.

D L Jackson said...

Interesting six and I wonder why she thinks he should be running with a pack.
Thanks for sharing.

Jayel Kaye said...

Oh, I liked this and want to know more

Jessica Subject said...

An intriguing excerpt!

Marie Dees said...

Nice six. Hmm, sexy men who run in packs.

Rebecca Royce said...

I really love your voice!

Lauri J Owen said...

Hmmm. Wonder where this is going? Great six.

Lindsay said...

Interesting setup for things to come

laynap said...

Great six. Now I want more! I love wolves!!!

Kathleen Grieve said...

This Six definitely wants me want to read more. Great job!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Intriguing! More please! :)