06 August 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Continuing on  from the last leave off point:


Pulling each finger from my skin with a vicious tug, he ran his tongue along the wounds, moaning when my blood entered his mouth. I couldn’t see his face in the darkness, couldn’t see anything but the light reflect off the monstrous talons as they reached out to latch into the tender skin along the side of my breasts.


With a scream, I tried to writhe out from underneath him. But his heavy body held me in place by then, even if the invisible ropes weren’t. Blinking, I brought half his face into focus and lost my breath to fear.


A clear green eye stared at me unblinkingly, calculating and cruel, and he ran his tongue over the fangs hanging out of his mouth.


Until next week! Happy Sunday!

12 comments:

Debra Moore said...

YIKES!!!! Now that's intense!

Gem Sivad said...

WEll that's intimidating. Invisible ropes, one green eye and fangs. Double yikes!

Sam Crescent said...

Intense but a great read,

Kathleen Grieve said...

SCARY! How is she gonna be saved? My mind is racing forward, but coming up empty! Need MORE, please!
INTENSE Six!

Cara Bristol said...

So well done. One of my favorites this week. Would like to know the title and a little more about it.

Paula Martin said...

Wow, that is gonna give me nightmares! Scary!

Gayle Ramage said...

Oh my god, that is horrible (the situation that is, not the writing). Well-written snippet!

Sondra said...

Wow, I got chills reading that. Truly horrific writing. What I mean is, truly great horror. It's very visual which is what makes Stephen King's horror stick in your mind to haunt you. Please give us more.

Sandy Nachlinger said...

That's plenty scary. I'll probably think of it again as I try to go to sleep tonight.

Sarah Mäkelä said...

Wow! Creepy six! Great job describing what's happening.

Vivien Dean said...

Very creepy! Interesting to see how (if) she gets out of it.

Bree said...

Powerful and scary six!