05 February 2011

Six Sentence Sunday!

Continuing on from last Sunday:

“I may have to call you one day to relieve my back strain.” He smiled again, that wide smile that made the dimples pop, and I felt my own lips spreading in the first real smile I’d given since Pablo had taught me checkers and let me win.

“Unfortunately, I don’t have a phone,” I lied again, “but you can email me.” I gave him the email address Josh had since I didn’t want to have to remember too many. Nobody would be the wiser, I thought.

“Is that your name, Shay? It’s pretty. I’m Kieran.” He extended a hand and I took it, but instead of shaking hands he raised my knuckles to his lips and kissed them gently.

17 comments:

Marie Dees said...

And just what did she do to relieve his back pain?

Chrystalla said...

Love their names! And nice tension building, can't wait to read more.

Arlene said...

Love the gentleman kiss on her hand. I'd read on just to find out why she's lying to this intriguing guy.

Sarah Grimm said...

Dimples? He has dimples and she lies to the man? Say it isn't so. :)

Great six!

Ann Mayburn said...

Gotta love a man who kisses your hand. :)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Dimples and a kiss on the hand? What's the problem, Shay? (If you are, in fact, Shay!)

Jayel Kaye said...

Great post. Sounds like fireworks is on the horizon.

Eleri Stone said...

Very nice buildup. Want to know where they take it from here.

Edie Ramer said...

I like! A very promising beginning to a romance.

Sandra Sookoo said...

Aww, I love a man with dimples.

Alanna Coca said...

Nice six, Lindsay!

Emily Cale said...

Nice six! I'd love to see more.

Trish said...

Nice! raises all sorts of questions. Like why she is lying.

Dee Carney said...

Verra smooth there, fella. Nice.

Joleene Naylor said...

Interesting! wonder why she's lying...

Casi said...

I've done that, but at the time I really didn't have a phone and he never e-mailed me.

I was very disappointed.

Lucy Felthouse said...

Very seductive. Great six! :)