Here's Delila again:
A bulky man let me in. With a jerk of his head he walked down a short hallway to a set of spiral stairs and waved a hand downward.
"You first, muffin," I said. As I suspected, he descended slowly and carefully to avoid the traps that had been set so blatantly in my honor. When a guillotine swung down, he ducked. I leaped neatly onto the chain and smiled at him as it moved back and forth. "I'll take it from here. Thanks!"
She's spunky.
31 comments:
Nice snippet! I think I like this girl!!
I really, really like her! Well done.
Sounds like a great heroine! :-)
Love the muffin comment. Love her!
Definitely makes one wonder what's coming up!
"Muffin"
I love it! Go, Delila.
She is indeed, spunky, I really like her. Nice six!
~Sarah
I love her!
A girl with an attitude and brains- love her to death- like a female MacGyver
you had me at muffin. Great show, and fantastic visual of the gullotine.
Love a feisty, intelligent heroine! Fun snippet.
Love how she makes him go first, knowing what to expect.
Muffin! LMAO!
That was very fun, Lindsay. Happy anniversary.
Wow. Sounds like fun, fun, fun! lol!
Spunky is right!
LOL
Loved the muffin comment for a bulky dude. Show great character there, as does the rest of it.
I don't think spunky quite covers it. LOL
Kick arse !! I like her !! she has spunk !! loved the sixer !!
Lol muffin !! she doestn seem so sweet to me lol.
thanks kat
kittee_cat@bigpond.com
I like this. She's feisty :)
I'm wondering where they are heading and why. Such a fun 6!
Muffin. one of my favs!
Spunky! I love her attitude! Great six!
Wow! Lots of action in that snippet.
lmao at the you first mufffin....love it
Hmmm sassy! I love it!!
xx
Angela
http://angelasstone.livejournal.com
Love the attitude--not a heroine to underestimate!
She sounds like a great character. Would love to know more. I'll have to check the book out.
I love how she calls him muffin, yet suspects foul play -- she sounds feisty. love to read more!
She is fun! Can't wait to read more.
"muffin". I like that!
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