"You're right, of course." He took another long drink and I watched his Adam's apple flex taking the liquid down. "I came back to see you."
A drop of sweat beaded on the bottle and ran down the side to meet Shadow's hand. "I'm not sure where the confusion is, but I don't run with biker gangs."
In the fluorescent light of the bar his eyes were an unnatural shade of orange instead of the warm brown they should have been. "I'm not with the gang right now, am I?
22 comments:
Oops! Love that last twist. :) Great snippet.
I think I like where this is going. Sam and Shadow are going to make sparks fly soon, I think! Great six.
I'm wondering what other colors his eyes can be. Very nice snippet.
yes - orange eyes - the mind imagines
Ohh, good interplay between the two of them. yep, he's not with the gang right at this moment.
YIkes. this sounds really , really good!
Love how you've shown us how distracted Sam is by Shadow, the tension build and twist makes me want to know more. Thanks for sharing!
Oooh, very tense and sexy. Love this bit.
I loved the adam's apple description. Well done.
Shadow is very distracting. Might as well put our full attention on him!
This is a great set up! Orange eyes, wow, that just blew me away.
Love the snippets. Bet the bottle wasn't the only place where there was a bead or two of sweat dripping down.
How can a bottle sweat? Is HIS sweat dripping down the bottle or is it condensation dripping down?
Nice six!
Oh, dear. He sounds so serious. Goox six.
Oooo, something's up! What a great snippet!
Gotta love it when thing turn "unnatural."
Oh he's just full of sexy attitude! Love it!
Great tension and anticipation of what will happen next!
I love his response! Nice six!
Something about biker gangs scare the poo out of me. Already on the edge of my seat lol
Orange eyes? Yay for something different! Great tension between them.
Ohhhh! I like him. It's the flippant wit.
~ Renee
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