17 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Continuing on with Sam's story:

"You're right, of course." He took another long drink and I watched his Adam's apple flex taking the liquid down. "I came back to see you."

A drop of sweat beaded on the bottle and ran down the side to meet Shadow's hand. "I'm not sure where the confusion is, but I don't run with biker gangs."

In the fluorescent light of the bar his eyes were an unnatural shade of orange instead of the warm brown they should have been. "I'm not with the gang right now, am I?

22 comments:

Cate Masters said...

Oops! Love that last twist. :) Great snippet.

Jenna Jaxon said...

I think I like where this is going. Sam and Shadow are going to make sparks fly soon, I think! Great six.

graylinfox said...

I'm wondering what other colors his eyes can be. Very nice snippet.

sue said...

yes - orange eyes - the mind imagines

Marie Dees said...

Ohh, good interplay between the two of them. yep, he's not with the gang right at this moment.

Jayel Kaye said...

YIkes. this sounds really , really good!

Roberta Walker said...

Love how you've shown us how distracted Sam is by Shadow, the tension build and twist makes me want to know more. Thanks for sharing!

Eleri Stone said...

Oooh, very tense and sexy. Love this bit.

Rebecca Royce said...

I loved the adam's apple description. Well done.

Jessica K said...

Shadow is very distracting. Might as well put our full attention on him!

Jenna McCormick said...

This is a great set up! Orange eyes, wow, that just blew me away.

Lindsay said...

Love the snippets. Bet the bottle wasn't the only place where there was a bead or two of sweat dripping down.

Vegetarian Cannibal said...

How can a bottle sweat? Is HIS sweat dripping down the bottle or is it condensation dripping down?

Nice six!

Liana Brooks said...

Oh, dear. He sounds so serious. Goox six.

Lisa Fox said...

Oooo, something's up! What a great snippet!

kayspringsteen said...

Gotta love it when thing turn "unnatural."

Stacey Kennedy said...

Oh he's just full of sexy attitude! Love it!

Verna Clay said...

Great tension and anticipation of what will happen next!

Jessica Subject said...

I love his response! Nice six!

Alanna Coca said...

Something about biker gangs scare the poo out of me. Already on the edge of my seat lol

Jean Davis said...

Orange eyes? Yay for something different! Great tension between them.

Zenobia Renquist said...

Ohhhh! I like him. It's the flippant wit.

~ Renee