16 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

I'm going to switch it on back to Billie for a few weeks, seeing as she releases soon. Here we go:


In the last room in the house sat a wolf. He glanced at me with beautiful blue eyes and then looked away as though ashamed of himself. I stepped into the room and angled my head to look at him. "Hello, wolf," I said, expecting a response. He stood, shaking his fur out to alleviate the dust and approached me slowly, circling and sniffing my hair. Standing still, I wasn't fearful of him at all.

Have a happy week, and don't forget to save those ta-ta's! :)

10 comments:

Liz said...

Nice descriptive six!

Ginger Simpson said...

Very nice. I even saw the fur rippling.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Oh - love the rippling fur. Nice wolf and nice six!

Sam Crescent said...

Great six

Elyzabeth M. VaLey said...

Why isn't she afraid of the wolf? Nice six!

Vivien Dean said...

Good use of description. Thanks for sharing!

writerreese said...

Tense. I like it!

Gem Sivad said...

Nice visual. Intriguing six. Is the narrator a woman or a female dog? I couldn't tell but kind of felt like it was a dog sizing up the wolf. ?

Eleri Stone said...

I'd be scared! Curious as to why she'd not.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Great fairy tale type voice here!