08 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Happy Sunday, folks! I think I'll kick off a new WIP this week. Sam and Shadow still haven't come back from the dark recesses of my mind.

Hmm...Here's a bit from a piece I've been working on periodically. The antagonist in this one was interviewed somewhere already because he refused to leave me alone. lol, here we go.

Groaning, I rolled over and blinked a few times to bring my alarm clock into focus. Three-thirty in the morning? Who the hell was texting me at three-thirty?

With sloppy movements, I activated my touch screen and winced against the bright light as the unfamiliar number popped onto the screen.

'Bitch. Where are you?'

So begins Beth!

21 comments:

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol well, who was it? And where's she supposed to be? Nice start!

Rebecca Royce said...

Oh my gosh, great last line!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Awesome! I want more!

Gem Sivad said...

That's a grab and hook. Great six!

Gayle said...

lol, nice text!

Great six!

Kim Knox said...

Oh, love this. Great six, Lindsay

Zee Monodee said...

Oh, I wanna read more! Good start, Lindsay!

Sara York said...

Nice

Jessica K said...

Oh my, it's never good to get such a text from an unknown number. And at such an early hour! So many grabs in six short sentences.

Sarah Grimm said...

Not a good text to receive. Nice six!

Lindsay said...

Who's bed is she in? Hers. You left us with a great hook

Marie Dees said...

Hmm, such language for 3:30 in the morning.

Stacey Kennedy said...

Your description was amazing...seriously, I felt like I was there experiencing that. Nicely done!

Lynne Murray said...

Excellent hook into the story--suspenseful six!

Verna Clay said...

My interest is definitely peaked!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Well, whoever it is, he/she definitely knows how to get a response. Them's fightin' words! LOL!

Pippa Jay said...

Eek, scary! I'd be wide awake after a text like that.

Kathleen Grieve said...

intriguing! sounds like you're off to a great start with this one!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Oh dear, poor gal, being awoken like that.

Roberta Walker said...

A rude awakening, for sure!

Jayel Kaye said...

Terrific hook. So many quetions to answer