“When she gets sober.”
He reached for me as I shoved out of the covers and stood. “I know that, Dalton, but she’s my twin.” I padded out of the bedroom, pulling the door closed behind me.
Once safely in the kitchen, I opened the message: 'If this isn’t Emily, then who is it?'
25 comments:
oh, I'm totally intrigued to read more, to learn more...what's going to happen? Fab six!
Great dialogue and insight
Ooo, creepy! Who could it be???
What happens next? No really, you can tell me. ;) Great six!
You keep ramping up the suspense! Great job
I want to know what's going on. Bet the husband does too. Great suspenseful six!
Quite a bit of intrigue here!
OMG who is it? Really? More!
Oh I totally want to read more.
Great six--I continue to love how you put the suspense into an ordinary-seeming situation.
Wow. This texter is persistent. Intriguing six.
You've got great suspence going on here, love it.
Well, that solved one of the mysteries, but there is so much more. A great six!
Totally want to know who's texting her!
That six is totally intriguing
I agree with everyone else, vey suspenseful. Making me nervous for her!
I want to keep on reading!
You've hooked me! I want I know who it is too.
This whole text message idea is great. I'm enjoying your weekly six sentences. Keep 'em coming.
I definitely want to read more...love the name Dalton and have always been interested in twins...my mother is a faternal twin and my father has identical twin sisters and I wanted to have them, but didn't. I have even started a couple of stories involving twins, just haven't finished them yet. I won't to know more about your story.
Ooooh - nice hook to keep us reading! Great six!!
I'm with Lisa...Creepy! But not only who...but what does he/she want???
Uh oh. Now that is the million dollar question.
Eek, I wouldn't answer. But then, the caller would just be convinced it IS Emily. What's she going to do?!
I love stories about twins. MUst be the added dimension and specilness of twins
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