29 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Continuing on in the text message saga:

“When she gets sober.”

“You know that’s not happening anytime soon.”

He reached for me as I shoved out of the covers and stood. “I know that, Dalton, but she’s my twin.” I padded out of the bedroom, pulling the door closed behind me.

Once safely in the kitchen, I opened the message: 'If this isn’t Emily, then who is it?'


26 comments:

JoAnne Kenrick said...

oh, I'm totally intrigued to read more, to learn more...what's going to happen? Fab six!

Anonymous said...

Great dialogue and insight

Lisa Fox said...

Ooo, creepy! Who could it be???

Sarah Grimm said...

What happens next? No really, you can tell me. ;) Great six!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Very intriguing!

Zee Monodee said...

You keep ramping up the suspense! Great job

Gem Sivad said...

I want to know what's going on. Bet the husband does too. Great suspenseful six!

Jessica K said...

Quite a bit of intrigue here!

moniquejames said...

OMG who is it? Really? More!

Rebecca Royce said...

Oh I totally want to read more.

Susanna Fraser said...

Great six--I continue to love how you put the suspense into an ordinary-seeming situation.

ada-hoffmann said...

Wow. This texter is persistent. Intriguing six.

Arlene said...

You've got great suspence going on here, love it.

Jessica Subject said...

Well, that solved one of the mysteries, but there is so much more. A great six!

Lisa said...

Totally want to know who's texting her!

Lindsay said...

That six is totally intriguing

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

I agree with everyone else, vey suspenseful. Making me nervous for her!

Marie Dees said...

I want to keep on reading!

Kaycee Kacer said...

You've hooked me! I want I know who it is too.

Sandy Nachlinger said...

This whole text message idea is great. I'm enjoying your weekly six sentences. Keep 'em coming.

Jacqueline said...

I definitely want to read more...love the name Dalton and have always been interested in twins...my mother is a faternal twin and my father has identical twin sisters and I wanted to have them, but didn't. I have even started a couple of stories involving twins, just haven't finished them yet. I won't to know more about your story.

Meg said...

Ooooh - nice hook to keep us reading! Great six!!

Kathleen Grieve said...

I'm with Lisa...Creepy! But not only who...but what does he/she want???

Hailey Edwards said...

Uh oh. Now that is the million dollar question.

Pippa Jay said...

Eek, I wouldn't answer. But then, the caller would just be convinced it IS Emily. What's she going to do?!

Jayel Kaye said...

I love stories about twins. MUst be the added dimension and specilness of twins