22 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

And Beth again:

“Yeah, babe, just a wrong number.”

He groaned. “Did someone get your number mixed up with Emily’s again?”

This isn't Emily, I wrote. “I guess so.”

“When are you going to take her off your phone plan?” Dalton looked up at me with his lovely green eyes, shadowed by sleep.

Poor Beth. I feel bad for her where her story is going. lol

19 comments:

Arlene said...

I'm not sure what's happening here, but I'd read on just to hear more from the green eyed guy with sleep shadows. And to see how badly you plan to tormet Beth.

Cate Masters said...

Oh the things our characters have to endure, lol. Looking forward to reading more.

Cherie Marks said...

Hmmm. A little sexty-texty? Case of the wrong number? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Great six.

Gem Sivad said...

I'm intrigued. Have to come back and find out more. :)

Marie Dees said...

Hmm, just what's going on with that phone?

Lindsay said...

This story still has me intrugued as to what she's going to do.

Jayel Kaye said...

I can't figure out where this is going but I want to find out.

Jessica K said...

The worse you feel about what you're putting your characters through, the better the story from the reader's POV. This is intriguing.

Hailey Edwards said...

Undercurrents run deep here. Very somber six.

Jessica Subject said...

She has so many secrets she's hiding. I wonder if the stress of keeping them all will make her slip. Nice six!

Kim Knox said...

Intriguing six :)

Susanna Fraser said...

Nice. I like the interplay between what's said and unsaid.

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

I wonder who she's trying to protect, herself, him, or Emily. (Ah, character torture. Is there anything better? Or worse?)

Camryn Rhys said...

Thanks for stopping by my blog. I enjoyed your six. :)

Jean Davis said...

I'm a little confused as to what is going on, but Dalton's eyes sound enticing.

Verna Clay said...

I'm hooked on his green eyes!

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Very intriguing. It's so unnerving to be awakened with a phone call or text message! I don't know what's happening here, but it can't be good.
BTW, thanks for commenting on my blog.

Lynne Murray said...

Can't see what the truth is yet, but some lies are clearly being told. Intriguing six!

Pippa Jay said...

This is all just so ominous. :(