Picking up from where we left off before I forgot to sign up for this lovely little list. LOL
Rain poured down
the window to her left. “Hey,” he said with an enthusiastic smile.
“Hey,” she replied,
trailing off when she couldn’t bring his name to mind. “How’ve you been?”
Nervous, Adelaide adjusted her glasses and tucked her hair behind her ears. It
wasn’t everyday a Congressman’s assistant spoke to a lowly paralegal at Capitol
Hill.
That's it for this week! Have a great one, everybody.
13 comments:
Great six, Lindsay! I felt her nervousness, and could tell she was somewhat of a nerd all in those few sentences!
Love how your portray her! Good job :)
Excellent six.
Simple, but wonderfully clear characterization and setting. Nicely done!
Nice set up illustrating with her thoughts and actions how she perceives their business levels.
I can feel the tension already. Great six.
Very cute! I could feel her nervousness and surprise. Hope he's nice.
Nice characterization.
hmmmm....wonder where this six leads. Fun Six :)
Her nervousness comes across loud and clear. Thanks for sharing!
Very sweet! Love the way you describe her character. Great six, Lindsay!
Love the little details that bring her to life here.
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